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    Literature of the week #15

    Literature of the week



    Alright Ladies and Gentlemen, it is time to vote for your favorite entry our contestants made on the theme:
    "Family"




    Remember, you can only vote for one entry so choose wisely.

    The criteria on which you should probably judge the entries are:

    Creativity
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    Impact on the reader (yourself)




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    Nooooooo!! I literally had one paragraph left!







































    - All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain -
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wrath View Post
    Nooooooo!! I literally had one paragraph left!








































    Send it in and i'll add it.

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    What does it say about us that ALL the Storys were freaking sad?

    I didn't lik #1 , however #2 and #3 are really, really great.
    I have yet to make up my mind which of these two entries I should vote for.
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    Voted for #3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Matternativ View Post
    What does it say about us that ALL the Storys were freaking sad?
    We are all just broken things.

    Five entries, is this real life??

    #1 Oh mother death. It was okey-ish the "prophesy" part could have been more elaborated.
    #2 I am rarely fond of poems, but this one was really good, emotionally strong, I just felt the pace at some parts was off.
    #4 Felt the introduction was sliiiiightly dragged, but I liked the overall development, it was well written and the 'plot twist' at the end was unexpected and very strong emotionally imo. The hype was real
    #5 Nice development, well written, the father-son moments were heartwarming, but on this one I feel like the end was sliiiightly rushed, or maybe in contrast with 4 it wasn't that strong, but kinda expected.

    I will re-read 4-5 later and decide on the vote.
    Great almost month week this one with an unexpected theme, I liked all the entries, I suppose Gir's attempt to make us write happy, jolly stuff failed, but he pushed us into something good after all

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    I may be a bit biased towards poems but I liked #2 a lot!!

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    1.
    I liked the story a lot, unlike other people. I think if I had a go on it, I would change slightly. Whilst the open ending is fun for anyone to imagine what happen next, but I believe some actual horror slash miracle would have been more fitted. That would be so cool.

    Nicely done!

    2. I'm a sucker for poems and this one, gosh. The feels! From uncomfortable to tense to reaching its peak and then degrading and rising up. I hope I make sense because that read kind of got me in a roller coaster. ^^ I feel so bad for her, I wish we could have supernatural powers to see these burden of people. Too many people suffer on their own.

    Well done!

    3. I cannot express how much I love this entry. Honestly, it was just like #2 a rollercoaster, I could imagine this happening, it was as if I was that little girl. You wrote it very beautifully.

    That was super! <3

    4.

    The jokes at the beginning reminded me of a Luffy/Ace brotherly AU fanfic that I have read. Had me smiling like a fool, and the sarcasm at the end was so weird. Made me laugh a little bit, but definitely not the ending wasn't what I had hoped for. All in all, it was actually heartwarming.

    Great job!

    5. What the F did I just read? That was some horror towards the ending. Honestly if it wasn't for another entry I believe I would have chosen this one. The very beginning of father & son conversation was really nice to read. I enjoyed that, it reminded me of a Sanji / Zeff AU fic that I have read. I really want to know what happened after, is Alex the only one that sees her or does his dad too? Idk if it was meant to be creepy, but it certainly did scare me.

    Keep it up!





    GUYS!! IM REALLY PROUD!! So many entries and all of them are so well written and good!

    Seems like we could use some votes though ... *tags everyone from her friendlist* VOTE! please

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    I am the opposite case compared to Indigo so picking #3
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    1 was an interesting plot, but felt like it lacked development and a strong ending compared to the other stories.

    2, I like poems, but I'm a sucker for rhymes ... this one didn't have many, despite being a strong subject.

    3 good story, reminded me of the refugee situation. Some spelling mistakes (ophone?) and sentence construction drew me off a bit.

    4 was a jolly, cheerful one until it took a dark turn. I was like "oh no" near the end. Felt for him. I liked the brother's banter at the beginning, which made the ending much harder.

    5 had a cute beginning, nice development and good details. I just felt that the ending lacked more focus, focus that the rest of the story had. Essential focus to end it strong.
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